Plumtree

Nicole - well done for posting everything on time and having your blog up-to-date.

Positives:

• The trailer works quite nicely and I like the addition of the text in red to appeal to the audience
• Your website looks good and the links all work effectively
• Your poster image is simple but in keeping with your chosen genre and the overall content of your film

Improvements:

• The font used for the film title on the home page of your website is different to the trailer and poster and thus greatly affects continuity across your products
• Have you experimented with colour for the text on the poster and the website? The white text looks almost too clinical where red might suggest more of the horror element you are trying to achieve
• The text at the bottom of the poster is still confused and with a few too many mistakes. Look at it carefully and adapt it so that it is structured more clearly
• The post-production sound of the knife going into the victim's body in the trailer doesn't sound right. See if you can find a better soundbite that is more realistic